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Chris Rauber's avatar

Wonderful. Sometimes a very few words can say more than volumes.

Radically accessible poems's avatar

The right words, for sure!

Louis's avatar

I have many opposing parts -- "walk the dog, you'll love the fresh air" versus "stay in, it's cold, and the dog can hold it." But when in a heart space, soul space, love space like Jordan describes, there are no oppositions, only unity.

Jane Wattenberg's avatar

Spare the air …. Just stunning.

Radically accessible poems's avatar

Glad you like it. I am fond of short poems with long titles in general!