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Adrião Pereira da Cunha's avatar

This poem feels like someone thinking out loud on a day when the world is a bit too much and strangely beautiful at the same time. I love how it moves from small, awkward human moments — like being dull at dinner — to these sudden bursts of nature behaving in ways that feel almost embarrassing to witness. The graffiti line, “MEMORY LOVES TIME”, hits harder than it should, like something you stumble upon and keep turning over in your mind. And the honesty about old heartbreak lingering, not as a wound but as something that shaped you, feels painfully true. The dogwood at the end is unforgettable: a tree losing itself in blossoms, wasting beauty without hesitation. There’s something comforting in that excess, as if the world keeps creating more than it needs, more than we deserve, and doesn’t apologise for it. It’s messy, tender, and very alive.

Mary Feeney's avatar

What a wonderful text. Very hard to capture the way perceptions bubble during a drive and how random thoughts and memories may indeed blossom into beauty, then be discarded. Thanks to you and the late, lamented TH.

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